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What do you think of my poem?

Thursday, May 13th, 2010

The ocean takes my breath away,
Mountains mesmerize me,
I can spend all day in a meadow,
Or in the shade of trees.

But there’s one place I’d rather be
Where I could lie until I die,
It’s where I long for, when I feel,
I need some time to let my tears dry.

This is the place where,
I know I am not alone,
Not only is it my remedy,
It’s my definition of home.

My fears come to rest here,
My hopes come alive,
My purposes become clear,
This place is my life.

You won’t find this place in an atlas,
Searching the world would be a bad start,
Don’t bother looking on a globe,
For it’s only in my heart.

This sanctuary of which I speak,
Only belongs to me,
For lying in his arms,
Is my favorite place to be.

Please don’t copy! :)
Thanks so much!

hey umm i have tonsils i think its causing me bad breath?

Wednesday, May 5th, 2010

ever since i was 7 i had badbreath am aware of it now cause am a teenager i tried everything lol its like when i brush my teeth a minute from now a minute later my badbreath is back am tired of it help???????????

Do you think this could be asthma?

Sunday, May 2nd, 2010

I have only had an asthma attack once or twice and it was a few years back. I think both times it was exercise induced though. However, I am increasingly noticing problems with my breathing. I don’t know if it is asthma, hay fever, allergies, or something more serious. These are my symptoms though: I have a persistent tightness in my chest and it is hard for me to take full breaths and deep breaths. I believe this is constantly occurring, however, I notice it more at night. It’s hard for me to breathe through my nose even though it isn’t stuffy. I have to breathe through my mouth a lot of the times. My throat tightens up when it’s humid, and when I’m around steam, smoke, and perfume. I have nasal dripping, a cough that has been on and of for months. I don’t even remember when it started. I always have mucus in the back of my throat as well, and it seems like I can never get rid of it. Also, a few times my breathing has been so bad that I feel dizzy. I feel myself starting to panic, but I remind myself it will only make it worse, so I try to take slow breaths and after a few minutes I feel better, although I feel like I’m not breathing 100% great. Also, are there any home remedies that can help this? I have no health insurance.

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what do you think about this story ?

Sunday, May 2nd, 2010

well i have posted this before but i just got one answer and i needed more opinions i know the gramar is kind of messed up but im learning english and thats why im writing this story

“A BOYFRIEND!” I screamed really furious, I have to be dreaming
“Calm down! Breathe! Everybody is staring at us” she whispered really pleased, trying to be discreet.
“WHAT’S HIS NAME I’LL KILL HIM!”I said aloud I guess considering the situation, I made my best but it wasn’t enough her beautiful lightly pink skin has turn paper white and her usual bright light-blue eyes where dull , I forgot for a second how sensible she’s.
“Sorry” I whispered loud enough for her
I took like twenty five deep breaths and I walk in circles a while before been a jerk accidentally, again. I sit next to her and touching softly her cheek I asked “Could you beautiful lady tell me you’re boyfriend’s name?”
“Well I will consider that option” she said this time in a better mood she touch her blond curls and made a little but very significant smile.
“Lets go home” she add
“You’re really not telling me? Me…that I was born just to hear you” I said trying now to be funny and to be persuasive too.
“YOU…you don’t have cure, better take me home be responsible” she said while she gave me a punch in my tummy.
“That’s the mood you have after I told you my reason for living?”
She runs to Charles—that’s the name I put to my black Toyota Echo, my car in a few simple words—she open the door and nock the Clawson.
“HOME! I WANNA GO HOME!” she sang really loud
“Ok I’m going” I said while I shook my head, I got there and I turn on my car.
“Let’s go “home”—beeline” she interrupted me “I have homework”
“You’re sure you don’t want to spend a few more hours here?” I ask tentative
“You know it’s not a bad idea I can stay with my boyfriend and he maybe will like to carry me home it’s a great idea we alone in my room —I understood lets go home” I interrupted

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Sunday, May 2nd, 2010

i been writing things and i wanted youre opinion

“A BOYFRIEND!” I screamed really furious, I have to be dreaming
“Calm down! Breathe! Everybody is staring at us” she whispered really pleased, trying to be discreet.
“WHAT’S HIS NAME I’LL KILL HIM!”I said aloud I guess considering the situation, I made my best but it wasn’t enough her beautiful lightly pink skin has turn paper white and her usual bright light-blue eyes where dull , I forgot for a second how sensible she’s.
“Sorry” I whispered loud enough for her
I took like twenty five deep breaths and I walk in circles a while before been a jerk accidentally, again. I sit next to her and touching softly her cheek I asked “Could you beautiful lady tell me you’re boyfriend’s name?”
“Well I will consider that option” she said this time in a better mood she touch her blond curls and made a little but very significant smile.
“Lets go home” she add
“You’re really not telling me? Me…that I was born just to hear you” I said trying now to be funny and to be persuasive too.
“YOU…you don’t have cure, better take me home be responsible” she said while she gave me a punch in my tummy.
“That’s the mood you have after I told you my reason for living?”
She runs to Charles—that’s the name I put to my black Toyota Echo, my car in a few simple words—she open the door and nock the Clawson.
“HOME! I WANNA GO HOME!” she sang really loud
“Ok I’m going” I said while I shook my head, I got there and I turn on my car.
“Let’s go “home”—beeline” she interrupted me “I have homework”
“You’re sure you don’t want to spend a few more hours here?” I ask tentative
“You know it’s not a bad idea I can stay with my boyfriend and he maybe will like to carry me home it’s a great idea we alone in my room —I understood lets go home” I interrupted

answer please !!

What do you think of my poems?

Thursday, April 22nd, 2010

Have you ever wanted to bring a gun to your head
Have blood gushing out all over your bed.
Have you ever just wanted to take too many pills
Just enough so you know it kills

Have you wanted to walk in to burning fire
Watch the flames destroy all your attire
Have you ever wished to hang yourself on a tree
So dieing could really be a guarantee

Have you wanted your brakes to stall
So your car would go crashing into a wall.
Have you ever really wanted to cut your veins
So there was so much blood it stains.

What many don’t see is there is some in pain
People take it like it’s a game
But no one knows how they really feel
They talk about it, like it’s no big deal

There’s people out there wanting just this
Because there mom died, or got denied there first kiss
People out there really want to die
But why does no one ever care why

Cant you see your best friend might really be sad
Having a much worst life then you ever had
Don’t deny what you know is true
Or you could end up being a victim of suicide too

————————————–…
Why do we sleep during the night
The darkness is blinding, putting children in fright
Why do only some die before there time
In fires, earthquakes, and that one fatal crime

Why do we torture the weak, but praise the strong
When they are the ones causing what’s wrong.
Why do we look at the bad but never the good
Being nice to that girl like no one would.

Why do we use violence to solve all are mistakes
With guns, knives, and bones to break.
Why do we care for those who could care less
When they are the ones tearing up success

Why do we risk all we have worked for
To be richer then ever before
Why, do we always say goodbye
To the ones that never can give a reply
————————————–…
A solider is fatally shot the ground
A cry of hurt is his very last sound
His dad kicked him as hard as he could
He wanted his family to work like it should

A little girl is pushed off her very first bike
Her knee breaking with one simple strike
A man his deliberately punched in the jaw
His best friends face was the last he saw

A simple middle school fight lead to her death
Her boyfriend was fault of her very last breath
He just wanted his little angel to stop crying
He didn’t know shaking her lead to her dieing

She hit him for being the cause of the lies
Ignoring the bleeding, bruises, and cries
He shot the gun without thinking ahead
Knowing he’s the reason his brothers dead

Violence just leads to more hurt and pain
It’s like a cycle but there’s nothing to gain
But revenge doesn’t solve one little thing
Sooner or later you will feel the sting

Why don’t we all just live in peace
Causing all the guns and knives to decrease
And cant you all see your in danger to
Violence is finally here, and we all know its true
———————————
Dear god can you hear are cries from below
Don’t you see this is not all for show
People are dieing from lack of food
Begging for something to eat from the crude

Dear god cant you hear are prayers up there
All this pain and suffering is surely not fair
Are closet friends are dieing from one disease
Cure them now I beg of you, please

Dear god cant you see all the people in fear
Yelling at the sky hoping you will hear
All they want is someone to love
Raising there voices to the sky above

Dear god wont you listen to are pleas
All we want is for the pain to seize
People dieing from being in the wrong places
Hoping you will see the pain in there faces

God all we want is for you to see
That you can make this go away, you’re the key
And god were hoping you can hear are prayers
Hoping you’re the one that truly cares
————————————–…
Hello I am Danielle
I am only fourteen and have been writing for awhile
My poems are in order from oldest to most recent
And they generally talk about whats going on in the world
Tell what you think. Please and thank you.

tell me what you think of it??

Sunday, April 18th, 2010

If I could I would. I am so broke, I cry. I would like to fly. Get away. Run and hide. Over the mountains and thought he woods, across the rivers and canyons, around the puddles of mud and though the rain drops. Some where over or around the rainbow it would set me free, I would not hear a scream or shout I would not hear the nagging I would not see the people who hurt me I would not need to deal with it. I would be so free of every care in the world. I would love to just cut you lose and be myself. If every sad song brought me a tear, I would have a few cups willed with my eye fluids. I look at the calendar it tells me how much time is gone by, and how long I’ve been begging to leave, I am slowly dieing inside, but nobody can love me like I love myself. Some times being lonely is the best cure for all this pain and Misery. I cant take the loud noises from your mouth, from the radio from my mind, every bad thing is on a wheel being recorded and it repeats in my mind. I just cant deal with it. People have asked me to move out with them. But you’ve put the fear of trust and shame about my self in my mind. If I could cut my self lose and free my mind and free my soul from this living hell, I would not have every spoken another word to you I would not have give in you the opportunity to abuse and use me, treat me with such disrespect. It makes me so sick looking back, knowing that your begging me to stay. The empathy you show isn’t enough for now or forever to come. Your pity your money and your life doesn’t mean a thing. I am getting my own breath and breathing for what feels like the first time, is all I need now is to wait for the winds to carry me away. I am ready to spread my new wings and fly. Let new growth and new memories fulfill my life and cherish every thing that I would ever have in my life.

Help! I think I may have Acrophobia!!?

Sunday, April 18th, 2010

I think I may Acrophobia.
Ever scince I was little I was scared to even climb a tree.
I couldn’t enjoy going on the ferris wheel, because it always felt like I was going to fall off, and I can’t even go skiing.
My breath quickens and I start to get red-faced, and my heart beats really fast whenever I even think about high places.
I even get nausous and nervous and have to look away (usually) when I see high places in movies.
How do I tell for sure that I have Acrophobia? Or am I just being dramatic?
How do I tell how bad I have it?
What’s the best way to cure it? ((without scarring myself forever [teeheehee])
thanks a bunch!
just so you know i said
acro phobia
not agora phobia.
please don’t get them mixed up.
I don’t have it severly I know that much..
I just (think i may) have it somewhat.
and I’m not trying to compete by saying ohh! i’m way more scared then you.
i just wanted to know if there was a possibility

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I have bad breath coming from my throat, think it might be tonsil stones, anyone know how to get rid of them?

Sunday, March 28th, 2010

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cure for bad breath…best product or home remedy, any method you can think of…please help me on this.?

Friday, March 12th, 2010

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